
Yes, True Believers (the few of you that remain), I am, despite erroneous and exaggerated rumors to the contrary, very much alive. Some of you have forgotten my secret identity (through no fault of mine) and have opted to believe in the demise of Superhero Throwdown—done and buried, abandoned to a blog wasteland—but that is not the case! Fear not, devoted ones, we are back and still standing.
Now, I could give you a long-winded and long winding explanation compiled of half truths and lies, but why bother? Would you really care? I think not! So, without further adieu, I post my latest offering, in the hopes of A Brand New Day.
P.S. If you are wondering what happened in the weeks following our last post on July 19, I say don’t ask and don’t tell—it is afterall, just One More Day. Plus, most of us, would prefer not to be visited by Mephisto.
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SKETCH — MY CRITICAL ANALYSIS
Much like my mythical sketch for the Week 9 Superhero Throwdown Challenge, Superman, my Spidey threatened to take the skies and swing away. Spidey is the Marvel iconic equivalent to DC’s Man of Steel and, therefore, you have to capture his ’spidey’-ness if you will. There must be grace, fluidity, power and an inhuman flexibility to his poses. These are just characteristics that any avid, self-respecting Superhero Throwdown combatant must bring to the arena.
So why was it a challenge? Well, much like my Superman, it has to do with environment and perspective. In theory, I understand perspective very well—it suits my logical half. In practice, however, there are unforeseen secrets that I have not uncovered in any guide. You are, afterall, limited to the page, and the vanishing points often exist beyond these boundaries. So how do you draw lines on the page to points that you need to place off the page?
What are vanishing points? They are the points that all linear building lines converge toward and disappear to off in the distance. Now, without getting into a detailed perspective tutorial (there are many web resources, here’s one), here are the points you need to know as it relates to this sketch: lines vanish off to a right vanishing point and a left one as well. You, the viewer, are above and can see the rooftops of shorter buildings. My perspective isn’t perfect and though it adds to the overall drawing, it also isn’t completely right (I’ll leave you to figure that out for yourself).
Spidey not only has villans like the Green Goblin that plague him, but he has J. Jonah Jameson, the current mayor of New York City. If Jameson is a thorn in Spidey’s side then the Goblin is obviously the stake—or is it a H.A.M.M.E.R.? Eitherway, a typical day in the life of Peter Parker wouldn’t be complete without multiple problems. I chose to depict not only Spidey dodging pumpkin bombs, but having the ever present Mayor Jameson shown on a billboard.
The handdrawn Jameson type is a bit tricky. Admittedly not being a typographer, it looks off to me. Even though I tried to draw it in perspective, it seems to come forward and off the billboard as The Commish rightly pointed out. This could have been due to the dark outlines surrounding the letterforms, but probably has more to do with the letter shapes themselves. In today’s modern world, this would be cleaner if this was typeset on the computer. Additionally, much of the shading that I’ve done here to help with the overall composition would be separated better with digital color.
Overall, I like the way the composition works—the lights and dark values that permeate throughout the image. A good colorist would solve the problem area around Spidey’s head, where I’ve drawn his spidersense and it blends with the background a bit. I do like how Jameson’s billboard is flat on the building, but he seems to be glaring over at Spidey, saying: “You’re a menace to this city.”
Now for the man of the hour…Spider-man! Not having drawn Spidey in ages, I am quite pleased that I’ve captured him well in motion. I wanted to exaggerate the bend in his back a bit and actually had him leaning far more forward with his rib cage impossibly jutting out. Thanks to our other Superhero Throwdown combatant, Jay, for pointing out that it looked a bit strange. He was right! I took the rib cage in a bit more and simplified the shading so it didn’t look so unnatural.
Is that the end? You bet. Until next week. (And yes, there is a next week.)
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And look for another challenge folks. Pugilists dust off your pencils and get ready, SUPERHERO THROWDOWN IS BACK!
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